Personal Addition 

Personally, I love doing different and fun filled events such as going to the beach , long walks , hanging out with friends , not only that but exploring Winnipeg more even through it may seem like Winnipeg is small but  there are lots of things to see. One of the thing that I really want to do in the summer is go bus hopping. I've always wanted to do because it is fun and I always wanted to do something not knowing where I'm going to end up .

Comment #1

Here the link to get to it !
http://stephaniezappia.blogspot.ca/2013/03/six-word-memoir-6.html#comment-form

 The first comment I posted on stephanie blog.  Perosnally I commented on one of stephanie photos that she used for her 6 word memoir  becuase I thought it was very well done and it caught my eye becuase the quote that she used was well done . I thought that what she wrote was very true as well because "smile does not avoid your problems" at all !


Comment #2
here the link http://www.ellysescreativeblog.blogspot.ca/2013/03/my-family-means-so-much-to-me-and-i.html#comment-form

 The second comment I put on Ellyse blog becuase I tought that the picture she used for her six word memoir was so cute and fit the quote perfectly.  I agree with what she put as her quote. Family is everything , you should always keep them close to you no matter what ! In a blink of an eye something can happen , You not promsed tomorrow no one is! Everyone you have to check it out and see it for yourself so head over to Ellyse blog . The picture that used for her six word memoir is super adorible! You'll love it !

Comment #3
heres the link
http://beascreatingwords.blogspot.ca/2013/03/my-night_4.html#comment-form

The third comment that I posted was on beans picture that she took before she was going on a trip becuase I thought that was a good and smart idea and thought it was kind of cool becuase I do the same before I go anyway when I travel, What  she does is she  printed out an extra copy of everything she need for trips  and put a copy in her dance binder so it didn't get misplace . Which personally I thought was very smart becuase you never know when you may lose something and you certantily don't want to get stuck somewhere away from home because that would stuck, All thought it might be fun if your with a group of friends but still it would get borning after a while.  All in all I just thought that it was a good idea ! Perosnally, I do the same as well and I thought I was the only one but it turns out other people do it to ! So I'm not the only one after all .

Personal addition

Personally . I had a good weekend I mostly worked though it. It was kind of tiring but money is what motivates me because I'm saving up to go to Vegas in may . I'm super pumped and excited because I never been to Vegas and I get to go with my family and friends. Which is going to be so much fun and I get to go to the Eminem store and the wax museum that they have in Vegas .were going to be going to all the hot spot there and I'm super excited because we're going to there for a week but I wish we were going longer but the. Again I can always go back because I'm still young and have plenty of time to explore the world .

COMPLETED 

Memoir#1-confession 

Memoir#2-family

Memoir#3-growing up

Memoir#4-future

Memoir#5-hate

Memoir#6-Love

Memoir#7-me

Memoir#8-my past 

Personal Addition 

Favourite Assignment !

Personally , so far creative writing has been fun I've learned a lot being in this class. Such how to be more creative and expand on my ideas and thoughts. I've learned new and cool ideas and personally one of my favourite thing that we've done in creative writing would have been when we had to do  6 word memoirs .  I thought it was fun and a cool idea and I hope that we get more fun projects like this one because I really enjoyed it . Second because it was kind of a challenge for me to think of some of the quotes and be artistic with the project  but over all I collected all my thought and ideas and was able to overcome my fear of not being able to finish it ! So far the  6 word memoir was my favourite project yet ! 

Memoir#8

My past 

My past reflects who I am as a person my past has helped shape me into the person I am now today It may not seem like it but everything it does every little thing.. My mom and my sister play a huge role in helping shaping me because I grew up with them and I was with them the most and they significantly play an important tole. My past will always be with me .

My quote- past reflects who I am today 

Memoir#7

Me

Personally , I'm myself no one else I am who I am and I just like having fun and being me .The people that have helped shape who I am as a person is my mom and  they mean the world to me I look up to them 100 percent. My sister is very inspiring because she has graduated from university and has a degree and is getting married. Which is amazing because she has done so good for her self and she a very good role model and is inspiring.. I love my mom and sisters so much there amazing and they;ve been there for me form my ups and downs and always taught me right from wrong and personally I don't know where I;d be if I didn't have them in my life. 

My mom is an amazing person and she is amazing and she put up with me at my worst and my good moment in life and is still standing strong she's a hard worker and has been though more then ever and which makes me love her even more because she has significantly has helped shape the person I am today. I love my family to an extent that I cant reach without them in my life I ont know where I'd be they mean more then anything to me. 

My quote -I'm me that's who no else!

            

  Memoir#5

HATE

Hate - Personally ,  I hate mice  there so creepy and they just look nasty . I've never liked them and  I I personally get really freaked out by them really easily ! I don't know why I've just always been very scared of them.  Its has just been one of those thing where I never really liked them just because they can carry so many different kind of diseases. I personally didn't have any photos of them so I took one of the Internet .


My quote-- *I strongly hate mice so much*

Memoir#6-Love 

Personally, I'm very family orientated partly has to do with my mom because she's is very involved and is an  incredible women! She always knows how to put a smile on my face when I'm upset or if something is bothering me.  Were very close! I love being around my family because there always there for me. I'm always there for them. If something goes wrong my mom would be right by my side in and instant and help me though it even though I'm very independent its nice to have someone there for you To me family is everything and I love them long term and that would never change. 

My quote - Family is never ending cherish them 

What I've done to put this picture together was use pic monkey and added a bunch and created a collage because I though it was a creative way of putting these photos together, 

Weejly response #5

Perks
Stephen chobski
Pg 100 -110

Weekly response #5

Personlly , theres not much left to read but what I've read so far has been quite interesting and becuase there has been so many twist and turns though out the entire book . Some of the things that I'm personally shocked about . One of thoes shocking mooments for me is the fact that Charile kissed Sam at the little party (gathering ) they were at because they were playing a game similar to spin the bottle and charlie got asked to kiss the pretties girl in the room and he had kissed sam in instead of his date and she really liked him but Charile really loves Sam a great deal but Charilss date didnt know that he liked Sam as much as he did but Chariles friends were pretty shocked and so was I as the reader but personally I kind of predict that that was going to happen . Considering though out the entire book Charils is always complimenting Sam and really wants to date t her but she feels old for him so she trys to hook Charile up with Sam friend which is Chariles date which charile ends up embarrassing his date . Persoanly I thought that was so mean of him but then again he said of he kissed his date that he aould be leading her on even more and that he dodnt want that to happen. Which persoanlly I understand whatt point of view CHarile is coming from . Then again he shouldn't of lead his date on for as long as he did. I think he should of told her before they went to that small gathering so at least she new instead of getting her heart pulled on and messed around with . Thats just my thought. Now Chariles friends don't really talk to him because of this and he is shutting everyone out from his life becuase lf obe little inceident that occured . Its crazy how one moment you can be laughing and in two seconds flat you have no one by yourside and your standing there alone and dont know what to do with your life . Thats the kind of vib I got about Charile when he turns to drugs for comfort . Personally i just think that he should take some time of off everything and he should just figure out how to prove to hos friends and especially his date that he's way better then that Then again j dont think people shoyld have to prove themselfs i think people should just exprct people for how they are . In this case I think its a different situation becuade Charile was messing around woth a girls heart whoch is HORRIBLE ! All in all Charile learns his lesson to jever do thay again and him and hos froends are cool and fronds again and he ends up getting a second chance with the girl and apologizies to her .

                                                                    Reflection 
                                                             Black Out Poetry 

Personally , I really enjoyed the Blackout Poetry it was really fun and different which is  why I really enjoyed it  !   It was kind of frustrating at the begging I started out a little bumpy because I would find one really good one and then try and connect it to two more was kind of hard but over time reading article after article you don't even think about it . Before you know it you have a theme and all of your poems connect to each other in some kind of way . Which I thought was neat  how they came together because at the start I was kind of worried that they weren't going to connect  There were a couple thing that I found very unique about this project that it was very different from very other one I've ever done not only that but its very different and with that said I thought that it was kind f neat how we make a poem out of a few words and all of sudden they just connect . 

Personally , I've learned a lot that I didn't know before such as I that I enjoy Blackout Poetry more then I thought I would . At first I thought it was silly but once I got engaged with it I really started to enoy it but at the begging I wasn't to sure of it so I think I learned never look a blind eye at something when you don;t know nothing about it ! Personally I think we should have more fun and cool assignment like Black out Poetry .

Weekly reader response #4

Perks
Stephen chobski
90-100

This weeks reader response  I happen to do something different. Which is always fun and exciting becuase the same thing can get borning after awhile . Which is why I thought this assignment was fun becuase you get to describe what the character interest are through creating a bunch of different apps . Which personanl I thiught was easy becuase I like explaining things and find it easy to create new and coold ideas . All in all I liked this assignment and i would lkke to do a similar one in the future .

                                                                    Memoir # 4 Future

Personally , my future is yet unknown personally I don't know what I want to do besides being a helping human being in our society today with that said I don't know exactly what I want to do I just know that where ever life take me and whatever career I decide to under take and accomplishes I know its going to do with helping children get out of gangs and reinforce them to stay positive and help them have a mind set to go to school and just reinforce them that people do care about them and ultimately help support them . Children now a days are more likely to become drop outs and join criminal activities. Which is honestly the saddest thing that can happen because no parents wants there child  to be drop outs and in gangs.That's why in my near future  I'm going to try and put a stop to this because those kids may not have a support system in there life which is why there probably looking for exception. Which children involved in these cases  think there going down on the right path with going criminal activities and that they think the guys that are telling them to steal stuff for them is there friend but in all reality there not there just using them to get what they want ! Not only that but more serious thing to get what they want . Which it is so important to have organization  open to help kids and teens like this. Some kids would probably look at this organization that I want to open one day with a blind eye because that's how kids are considering I am a teenager but I have a huge support system which is my mom that helps me a great deal which is why I think its super important that children and teens have the same thing in there life's because it just makes everything easier. Which is why I want to help children and teens and kids to have the same kind of thing that there missing out on , In some cases children don't know there parents at a young age and there adopted which also can cause these types off influence but not only kids that don't know there parents there also kids that might have parents but they don't support them in any kid of way which is why those kids are trying to reach out for help but they end up going in the wrong direction such as joining a gang ! Not to say that all children and teens and kids are involved in this  type of action . Only kids and teens that are trying to reach out to be honest you'd be amazed how much are involved which is very sad because their probably all bright and have good intention but don't know how to express them selves  Personally I don't know what I'd do with out my mom because she is my mom first and my best friend  second. my support systems she  helps me when I can't keep me feet on the ground . She means the world to me ! .

A  future is a helping hand !

Memoir # 3 Growing up 

Personally , I wish I was still little because you didn't have to worry about anything or anyone . You kind of just do you own thing and sit back and relax but besides getting into trouble with your parents that's a little different. There are a bunch of responsibilities that come along with growing up such as graduation which scares me the most because I have no idea what I'm going to be going after high school . not only that just the fact that I wont be with my friends because everyone is going to be going in there own direction and figuring out what there want to do because its not going to be like high school anymore were all going to be in the real world . 

all in all to me growing up scares me I just wish I was a little kid again were everything was way more slack and I  had no care in the world and  thought everything was perfect . Which everything is clearly not perfect and now that I'm grow up I know now that everything is far from perfect . Maybe who knows maybe just one day everything will be .As well as along with growing up there's transformation !

youth is still in me forever !

Memoir # 2

Family 

For this photo I chose to use a few different photo of my family members . Personally , I love my family so much and I'd do anything for them. When it comes down to it I'd say that my family is pretty loyal and very loving expectantly my mom she is very caring of others and always there for me . Which I really appreciate  Everyone in my family loves and cares for everyone so much .The sad part is that my siblings are all grow up and all of them moved out which is sad because I'm really close with them . My sister that is the oldest now moved out which really sucks because she didn't only moved out but she move to Alberta which sucks because its not like I can take walk and she her I'd have to flew out but its worth it . She always be there for me no matter what .

The same with  my step dad - I call him dad because he's been there for me since day one and I love him to death. He'll always be there for me as well . Were just super close. I wish  he was my real dad because like I've said before he has always been there for me since day one .On of our favorite moments is when we went on a  motorcycle ride which are so much fun I and enjoy them so much.

This one time we went on a motorcycle ride for 3 hours on the high way in the summer honestly I wish I could go back to that day because it was so much fun . The wind blowing super fast in our faces but we didn't care because we were having fun. The thing that I didn't like is when we were on the motorcycle we were going super fast and my dad was doing zig zaggs and I felt like I was going to fall of the motorcycle . I didn't I just got a huge adrenaline rush .

All in all I love my family so much and I'd do anything for them . I help them if they got into trouble we  have each other backs . No matter what were always going to be there for each other .

                   Ill always be by your side !

 Memoir # 1

confessions

Personally, my confession is that I adore Miley Cyrus she is amazing . Since day one when I heard of her and when I was little I listened to her music all the time and sometime it helped me escape the real world ,I was in my own world . If I ever got a chance to meet Miley Cyrus I would probably be overwhelmed because I looked up to her as I was growing up . when I was little I always watched Hannah Montana and I thought it was the coolest shaw considering her dad got to be in it with her and I've aways wanted to be an actor like Miley Cyrus I looked and admired her so much she was kind of like an mentor if that makes sense . I know one day I'll meet her I'm not going to give up . Never give up always believe !


 

                                  HATE

Six word memoir #4

------------->' I strongly hate mice so much ' 

Hate - Personally ,  I hate mice  there so creepy and they just look nasty . I've never liked them and  I I personally get really freaked out by them really easily ! I don't know why I've just always been very scared of them.  Its has just been one of those thing where I never really liked them just because they can carry so many different kind of diseases. I personally didn't have any photos of them so I took one of the Internet .

The link is www.mice.con - Personally I could even put a picture Neisse they are so nasty and I can't stand looking at them because they are so nasty so here is the link feel free to check it out and my quote is *I strongly hate mice so much*!

Personal addition

Personal Addition

Personally , my spring break was amazing I had such a good time . The reason why I had a good time was because I was with all friend and family which made it better then ever . We all laughed and was so relaxed because we didn't have to do anything like go to school . We got to sleep in but that didn't happen very much because I like to keep myself busy so all most everyday I Andy best friend Dylan went out and explored the city a little bit more . Even through it my seem there's not much to do in winning there is which actually kind of surprised me . I didn't really realize that there are cool and interesting things in Winnipeg . Even though I've been all most everywhere in Winnipeg it's still fun to explore with a friend that doesn't very often . I didn't only do that I also went out with some other friends and we went to a movie worst idea ever becuases we went to see SpringkBreaker (I don't know if you ever watched it but don't I'm telling you know save you money please) When I and  my friends and I went it to watch the movie we didnt think it was going to be that bad but it was we were so tempted to leave but we didn't becuasse the worst it got the funnier it had got . which was suprisly wired .

Black out poetry

                     Reflection 
                                                             Black Out Poetry 

Personally , I really enjoyed the Blackout Poetry it was really fun and different which is  why I really enjoyed it  !   It was kind of frustrating at the begging I started out a little bumpy because I would find one really good one and then try and connect it to two more was kind of hard but over time reading article after article you don't even think about it . Before you know it you have a theme and all of your poems connect to each other in some kind of way . Which I thought was neat  how they came together because at the start I was kind of worried that they weren't going to connect  There were a couple thing that I found very unique about this project that it was very different from very other one I've ever done not only that but its very different and with that said I thought that it was kind f neat how we make a poem out of a few words and all of sudden they just connect . 

Personally , I've learned a lot that I didn't know before such as I that I enjoy Blackout Poetry more then I thought I would . At first I thought it was silly but once I got engaged with it I really started to enoy it but at the begging I wasn't to sure of it so I think I learned never look a blind eye at something when you don;t know nothing about it ! Personally I think we should have more fun and cool assignment like Black out Poetry .

I had left a comment on Nick and Andy's picture that they created together. I chose that picture becuase I thought it was cute and it looked like they put a lot of effort into it .Which they most likly put a lot of hard work into becuase I remember being that little not not wanting to sit still for five minutes so I could imagine . How they felt when they made that photo . Autmatly I thought that they'd apperecaite and enjoy that someone is commenting on there photo even though there in grade 1 and 2 they were probably overwhelmed and excited that people were looking at there blog becuase I know if I were in grade 1 or 2  I'd be over joyed and excited .

 

 

Personally , to me a good comment is with no vulagr language and just being respectful to someone elses  work that they put out there for people to see that enjoy it. People do put a lot of work into the thing they want people to see and not to trash talk there stuff becuase I know that there are people  out there that do that which is unforunt but in some cases it can and cannot be controlled . All in all a good commment is just being respectful and friendly and not being rude to someones work.

 

 

On the other hand the characteristist of a byou ad comment are the following :Vulgar language and being rude and disrespectful , as well as thing such as goofying around and being mean and thinking you funny but you turly not !