Thinking back 

Favorite assignment.........

Personally, my favorite assignment would have to be the buried life project because it was a fun and you got to be creative with it and it sort of made me think what I want to do before I leave the physical world because  before I didn't really know what I wanted to do I just went by day to day living my normal kind of life going to school and not really thinking what I wanted  to do . This has really changed my mind set because it let me think and do thing that I don't normally do and sort of kind of explore and think WOW I'm just living a normal life like everyone else . Well that;s going to change because I don't want to live a normal life I want to be different then everyone else and do things no one else has done before I don't like being the same I like being different and I feel like by going day to day and not even relaxing that school , work has got in the middle of it and I just get caught with everything that I don't have time well today is the day that I'm going to make time and change the way I; doing things because I want to be able to live a long life and be able to accomplish everything that I ever wanted to do.. Personally , I think why this assignment is TBL because it has opened up my eyes and made me realize that I was just as normal as everyone else and now I just want to be different form everyone else. 

Least Favorite Assignment 

Personally,  my least favorite assignment was the twitter fiction because for one I don't really like twitter to begin with and it wasn't very fun and I had a hard time keeping up with it. Even though its easy because  its a click of a button but I don't like it and I think that twitter is over rated and everyone has it even though it fun to get connected to celebrity we weren't using it for that we used to to create twitter fiction which I didn't like because I thought it was boring no offence it was just my least favorite overall I enjoyed every other assignment. Why? I think it was just not very fun because I had a hard time creating a fiction story because I didn't know how to start it every time It didn't sound good or I wasn't a fan of it so if I didn't like it then who would kind of thing because I tried writing a story over an over again and I wasn't confidante with it  I didn't think that anyone  would enjoy my twitter fiction story if I didn't enjoy writing it at all . 

Fridays reading\/

Personally , I really enjoyed the Friday reading classes because they were very relaxing and a good way to end the week with a nice and settle quite class. All though sometime it was hard staying on track I was able to because it was a nice soft atmosphere and I loved the book I was reading so I think that helped  stay on track with the reading classes and I think the fact that our reading classes were on Friday was a good day to have them because it was the end of the week and a good way to end ti because during the week personally I was so busy with work and other thing it was a good break from all of the normal work that we had been doing in class which was good becuase once again it was very relaxing 

Mondays Reflection?

Personally I thought that Mondays reflection was a good way to start the Monday of because I found that  it was were easy for me because I had used all of the different sort  of strategies throughout the Fridays reading classes so it was easy for myself to complete the assignment that we given and not only that but because I was productive throughout the Fridays reading classes which had helped though the long run because  

The writers notebook 

Personally , I had a hard time keeping track of that and I didn't really like it because I personally wasn't very organized with it so it assent my favorite thing in creative writing .I think if I was more organized with the writers notebook it would of been easier to keep track of it because I would of been able to pick out thing that I like and didn't like .I thought that the writers notebook was a creative idea and a good way to keeping track of these throughout the course even though I didn't keep up with it I think that its a good idea. 

Blogger - Personally I enjoyed blogger but overall it was kind of hard keeping track of everything because we got a significant amount of assignment per day that it was hard getting everything updated on time all though I pulled it off I had to pull a lot of all tightener other wise it would be submitted at a later date which I had to do a couple of times but everything had it own way of working out . Over all I enjoyed using blogger I thought It was a good way of keep track of all of our assignment thoughout the course. The assignment that we got for the  most part we fun to do. 

Tweeting / technology  - Personally , The tweeting portion of creative writing I wasn't a major fan of because I'm used to going on twitter on my own account even though I not a fan of it I have an account costume made how I like it and I thought that twitter was to much because I thought that this course was going to be more about creative ways of writing and more physical activity not using the internet so much . I would of enjoyed more hands on projects because I like being creative . Not only that but because my image that I had coming into the course was a little different of the out come in terms of during projects and being creative because throughout creative writing we used a lot of technologies which I wasn't a big fan of because keep track of every single site and page is hard when you have a lot of things to do and other classes all though I pulled it off it was harder then I thought all though the assignment were fairly easy just keeping track of everything was sort of difficult even though I pulled it of . My though on the technology portion . I think that we used a lot of technology and I feel as if that I would of been fun doing more hands on projects and less technology don't get me wrong I enjoyed most of the assignment that we had done thought the course I just sort of wanted more hand on type of projects because coning into this course that's what I had in mind and I didn't think that it was going to be a bunch of technology  

What I've learned - Personally, throughout this course I've learned a lot about myself that I really like to write but only thing that I enjoy doing and such . I also learned that I really do like reading but it has to be something that I;m interested in otherwise its a no go because before I wouldn't  of thought about reading or to  to pick up a book and read but I enjoy it now because I just had to find something that I really liked and being in this course I was able to do so. As a reader I found that  I just need  to take a chance and find something that I really liked so I was able to finish a book and I ended up doing so While reading it made me think a lot about whats next and opened up my mind because it made me think more .and helped me become a better creator though this course everything tied up and every little project helped tie in with something which is why I like that about this course..

 Comments/Compliments/Constructive criticism for Ms.McLauchlan about the course

Personally , I love how you did different kind of thing that were new ideas because they were ery creative and fun . All though one of the thing that I personally wasn't a huge fan of was how much technology that we used throughout this course ,

Advice for future CW students?

Personally , I think that everyone that is in creative writing next year is just write from you heart have fun with everything you do because the assignments are fun when you have fun with it regardless if you don't like it just be yourself and be creative 

Personal addition 

Personally, I cant wait for summer because I have so much planned and I'm super excited because my sister is going to be coming in town and I haven't seen her for a couple of months and were super close so its really wired being apart from each other so I cant wait because we have so much planned . Such as go shopping , walk , camping , bike rides , getting out nails done everything you'd do with your sister which I think is going to be a fun filled week while she is here and most importantly I can't wait for her bridal shower because its going to be fun and I cant wait to see how its going to turn out. 

TBL - Now what 

Personally , I've all ready accomplished a coupe of my goals on my list . one them them were getting my belly button pierced., My sister got hers done and I was with her when she did it looked sort of painful and I watch the entire thing happen. So I think that's what took me so long to get it and i was a little young for it .I think by watching her get it done scared me away but come to think of it it didn't even hurt at all I thought it was going to hurt way more then it did which is wired. Another one of my goals that I'm going to be able to accomplish to going on a road trip with one of my best friends which is Seleena and this actually cover a couple of my goals because were going to the Justin Bieber concert and were going to be meeting Justin Bieber and that cover meeting a celebrity . Another one of my goals was to get another job which I've accomplished and now I have two jobs and I love them both even though it can be stressful sometime I get though it because I know in the end I'm going to be able to  send my mom on a trip and buy a vehicle which I've started and I have a couple of hundred dollars saved up all ready and I've been very careful how I sped and use my money I've been keeping track of everything.. So whats next? I'm going to keep on trying to check off my list by figuring out ways to finish my bucket list even though I have some ridiculous ones I know  I'll figure out away. 

If you'd like to see all of my 25 visuals for my buried life project you can visit instgram and its under Jacesburiedlife feel free to check it out., Don't be shy. 

TBL

The Buried Life Project 

My buck list 

1, Save a life

2, send my mom on a trip 

3,Get my belly button priced

4, Go sy diving

5, be in a movie

6, create my own talk show 

7, Donate to a charity 

8, play mu guitar in front of an audience

9, Help a person overcome a fear

10,Graduate from university 

11,Get another job

12, Get my full license

13, Meet a celebrity 

14, Be in a flash mob

15, Be in new york for new years eve

16, Go scuba diving 

17, Go on a trip with my best friend 

18, fall in love

19, Be in a music video

20,Buy a Harly Davidson motorcycle

21,Build a relationship with my dad 

22, Move out

23, Meet Ellen DeGeneres

24, Buy a vehicle

25, Help someone accomplish there dream 

26, Be more confident 

27, be more independent 

28, Go travel the world 

29, Help a homeless person 

30, travel by train 

31, Go somewhere hot 

32, Travel the world

33, Jump out of a helicopter 

34, Swim with dolphins

35, buy an ipad

36, save up a lot of money

37, Watch my younger step sister and brother graduate

38, Spray paint something

39, play tag roof to roof 

40, Go a on road trip by motorcycle

41, build my own house 

42, become a nurse or doctor

43, have children

44, buy a pug

45, Meet Miley Cyrus

46, Buy out a store

47, Be first row at a concert

48, Go backstage at a concert

49, jump into a pool from a trampoline

50, Attend my sister wedding 

51, watch my sister get married 

52, Meet the other parts of my family that live in Chatham

53, Build a stronger relationship with my dads side of them family

54, Go on a trip with my dad 

55, start singing lessons

56, learn to play the piano better

57, See my brother accomplish something

58, See other parts of the world

59, Coach a sport

60, Prank someone famous 

61, learn hip hop

62, Go in a hot air bollon

63, Meet paris hilton

64, create my own store

65, Buy a cabin 

66, Buy someones  order  

67, Workout more often

68, see my younger sister do something with her life

69, Do something crazy 

70, Find the man of my dreams

71, become a fitness trainer 

72, Help a homeless person out such as buy them a meal

73, Through a party (get wild)

74 , Visit my brother 

75, travel and see my family in Chatham 

76, Travel by bus for a long road trip

77, Join another cheerleading team

78, leave for a couple of day and just escape 

79, Visit my sister 

80, Give back to my mom 

81, Meet James Franco

82, be in a movie with James Franco

83, attend the Music awards 

84, make my own creation 

85, Create a new flavor 

86, Go somewhere different

87, Meet the president 

88, create a flash mob (block off streets)

89, be on the news 

90, Do something CRAZY 

91, start singing in public (forks)

92, Overcome a fear 

93, Get good grades 

94 Go to Hollywood

95, Go on a tropical island 

96, learn to surf 

97,sneak into the white house with the buried life boys 

98, be in a buried life show 

99, meet the buried life boys

100,  Accomplish all of my goals

Personal Addition 

Personally, I love doing different and fun filled events such as going to the beach , long walks , hanging out with friends , not only that but exploring Winnipeg more even through it may seem like Winnipeg is small but  there are lots of things to see. One of the thing that I really want to do in the summer is go bus hopping. I've always wanted to do because it is fun and I always wanted to do something not knowing where I'm going to end up .

Comment #1

Here the link to get to it !
http://stephaniezappia.blogspot.ca/2013/03/six-word-memoir-6.html#comment-form

 The first comment I posted on stephanie blog.  Perosnally I commented on one of stephanie photos that she used for her 6 word memoir  becuase I thought it was very well done and it caught my eye becuase the quote that she used was well done . I thought that what she wrote was very true as well because "smile does not avoid your problems" at all !


Comment #2
here the link http://www.ellysescreativeblog.blogspot.ca/2013/03/my-family-means-so-much-to-me-and-i.html#comment-form

 The second comment I put on Ellyse blog becuase I tought that the picture she used for her six word memoir was so cute and fit the quote perfectly.  I agree with what she put as her quote. Family is everything , you should always keep them close to you no matter what ! In a blink of an eye something can happen , You not promsed tomorrow no one is! Everyone you have to check it out and see it for yourself so head over to Ellyse blog . The picture that used for her six word memoir is super adorible! You'll love it !

Comment #3
heres the link
http://beascreatingwords.blogspot.ca/2013/03/my-night_4.html#comment-form

The third comment that I posted was on beans picture that she took before she was going on a trip becuase I thought that was a good and smart idea and thought it was kind of cool becuase I do the same before I go anyway when I travel, What  she does is she  printed out an extra copy of everything she need for trips  and put a copy in her dance binder so it didn't get misplace . Which personally I thought was very smart becuase you never know when you may lose something and you certantily don't want to get stuck somewhere away from home because that would stuck, All thought it might be fun if your with a group of friends but still it would get borning after a while.  All in all I just thought that it was a good idea ! Perosnally, I do the same as well and I thought I was the only one but it turns out other people do it to ! So I'm not the only one after all .

Personal addition

Personally . I had a good weekend I mostly worked though it. It was kind of tiring but money is what motivates me because I'm saving up to go to Vegas in may . I'm super pumped and excited because I never been to Vegas and I get to go with my family and friends. Which is going to be so much fun and I get to go to the Eminem store and the wax museum that they have in Vegas .were going to be going to all the hot spot there and I'm super excited because we're going to there for a week but I wish we were going longer but the. Again I can always go back because I'm still young and have plenty of time to explore the world .

COMPLETED 

Memoir#1-confession 

Memoir#2-family

Memoir#3-growing up

Memoir#4-future

Memoir#5-hate

Memoir#6-Love

Memoir#7-me

Memoir#8-my past 

Personal Addition 

Favourite Assignment !

Personally , so far creative writing has been fun I've learned a lot being in this class. Such how to be more creative and expand on my ideas and thoughts. I've learned new and cool ideas and personally one of my favourite thing that we've done in creative writing would have been when we had to do  6 word memoirs .  I thought it was fun and a cool idea and I hope that we get more fun projects like this one because I really enjoyed it . Second because it was kind of a challenge for me to think of some of the quotes and be artistic with the project  but over all I collected all my thought and ideas and was able to overcome my fear of not being able to finish it ! So far the  6 word memoir was my favourite project yet ! 

Memoir#8

My past 

My past reflects who I am as a person my past has helped shape me into the person I am now today It may not seem like it but everything it does every little thing.. My mom and my sister play a huge role in helping shaping me because I grew up with them and I was with them the most and they significantly play an important tole. My past will always be with me .

My quote- past reflects who I am today 

Memoir#7

Me

Personally , I'm myself no one else I am who I am and I just like having fun and being me .The people that have helped shape who I am as a person is my mom and  they mean the world to me I look up to them 100 percent. My sister is very inspiring because she has graduated from university and has a degree and is getting married. Which is amazing because she has done so good for her self and she a very good role model and is inspiring.. I love my mom and sisters so much there amazing and they;ve been there for me form my ups and downs and always taught me right from wrong and personally I don't know where I;d be if I didn't have them in my life. 

My mom is an amazing person and she is amazing and she put up with me at my worst and my good moment in life and is still standing strong she's a hard worker and has been though more then ever and which makes me love her even more because she has significantly has helped shape the person I am today. I love my family to an extent that I cant reach without them in my life I ont know where I'd be they mean more then anything to me. 

My quote -I'm me that's who no else!

            

  Memoir#5

HATE

Hate - Personally ,  I hate mice  there so creepy and they just look nasty . I've never liked them and  I I personally get really freaked out by them really easily ! I don't know why I've just always been very scared of them.  Its has just been one of those thing where I never really liked them just because they can carry so many different kind of diseases. I personally didn't have any photos of them so I took one of the Internet .


My quote-- *I strongly hate mice so much*

Memoir#6-Love 

Personally, I'm very family orientated partly has to do with my mom because she's is very involved and is an  incredible women! She always knows how to put a smile on my face when I'm upset or if something is bothering me.  Were very close! I love being around my family because there always there for me. I'm always there for them. If something goes wrong my mom would be right by my side in and instant and help me though it even though I'm very independent its nice to have someone there for you To me family is everything and I love them long term and that would never change. 

My quote - Family is never ending cherish them 

What I've done to put this picture together was use pic monkey and added a bunch and created a collage because I though it was a creative way of putting these photos together, 

Weejly response #5

Perks
Stephen chobski
Pg 100 -110

Weekly response #5

Personlly , theres not much left to read but what I've read so far has been quite interesting and becuase there has been so many twist and turns though out the entire book . Some of the things that I'm personally shocked about . One of thoes shocking mooments for me is the fact that Charile kissed Sam at the little party (gathering ) they were at because they were playing a game similar to spin the bottle and charlie got asked to kiss the pretties girl in the room and he had kissed sam in instead of his date and she really liked him but Charile really loves Sam a great deal but Charilss date didnt know that he liked Sam as much as he did but Chariles friends were pretty shocked and so was I as the reader but personally I kind of predict that that was going to happen . Considering though out the entire book Charils is always complimenting Sam and really wants to date t her but she feels old for him so she trys to hook Charile up with Sam friend which is Chariles date which charile ends up embarrassing his date . Persoanly I thought that was so mean of him but then again he said of he kissed his date that he aould be leading her on even more and that he dodnt want that to happen. Which persoanlly I understand whatt point of view CHarile is coming from . Then again he shouldn't of lead his date on for as long as he did. I think he should of told her before they went to that small gathering so at least she new instead of getting her heart pulled on and messed around with . Thats just my thought. Now Chariles friends don't really talk to him because of this and he is shutting everyone out from his life becuase lf obe little inceident that occured . Its crazy how one moment you can be laughing and in two seconds flat you have no one by yourside and your standing there alone and dont know what to do with your life . Thats the kind of vib I got about Charile when he turns to drugs for comfort . Personally i just think that he should take some time of off everything and he should just figure out how to prove to hos friends and especially his date that he's way better then that Then again j dont think people shoyld have to prove themselfs i think people should just exprct people for how they are . In this case I think its a different situation becuade Charile was messing around woth a girls heart whoch is HORRIBLE ! All in all Charile learns his lesson to jever do thay again and him and hos froends are cool and fronds again and he ends up getting a second chance with the girl and apologizies to her .

                                                                    Reflection 
                                                             Black Out Poetry 

Personally , I really enjoyed the Blackout Poetry it was really fun and different which is  why I really enjoyed it  !   It was kind of frustrating at the begging I started out a little bumpy because I would find one really good one and then try and connect it to two more was kind of hard but over time reading article after article you don't even think about it . Before you know it you have a theme and all of your poems connect to each other in some kind of way . Which I thought was neat  how they came together because at the start I was kind of worried that they weren't going to connect  There were a couple thing that I found very unique about this project that it was very different from very other one I've ever done not only that but its very different and with that said I thought that it was kind f neat how we make a poem out of a few words and all of sudden they just connect . 

Personally , I've learned a lot that I didn't know before such as I that I enjoy Blackout Poetry more then I thought I would . At first I thought it was silly but once I got engaged with it I really started to enoy it but at the begging I wasn't to sure of it so I think I learned never look a blind eye at something when you don;t know nothing about it ! Personally I think we should have more fun and cool assignment like Black out Poetry .

Weekly reader response #4

Perks
Stephen chobski
90-100

This weeks reader response  I happen to do something different. Which is always fun and exciting becuase the same thing can get borning after awhile . Which is why I thought this assignment was fun becuase you get to describe what the character interest are through creating a bunch of different apps . Which personanl I thiught was easy becuase I like explaining things and find it easy to create new and coold ideas . All in all I liked this assignment and i would lkke to do a similar one in the future .

                                                                    Memoir # 4 Future

Personally , my future is yet unknown personally I don't know what I want to do besides being a helping human being in our society today with that said I don't know exactly what I want to do I just know that where ever life take me and whatever career I decide to under take and accomplishes I know its going to do with helping children get out of gangs and reinforce them to stay positive and help them have a mind set to go to school and just reinforce them that people do care about them and ultimately help support them . Children now a days are more likely to become drop outs and join criminal activities. Which is honestly the saddest thing that can happen because no parents wants there child  to be drop outs and in gangs.That's why in my near future  I'm going to try and put a stop to this because those kids may not have a support system in there life which is why there probably looking for exception. Which children involved in these cases  think there going down on the right path with going criminal activities and that they think the guys that are telling them to steal stuff for them is there friend but in all reality there not there just using them to get what they want ! Not only that but more serious thing to get what they want . Which it is so important to have organization  open to help kids and teens like this. Some kids would probably look at this organization that I want to open one day with a blind eye because that's how kids are considering I am a teenager but I have a huge support system which is my mom that helps me a great deal which is why I think its super important that children and teens have the same thing in there life's because it just makes everything easier. Which is why I want to help children and teens and kids to have the same kind of thing that there missing out on , In some cases children don't know there parents at a young age and there adopted which also can cause these types off influence but not only kids that don't know there parents there also kids that might have parents but they don't support them in any kid of way which is why those kids are trying to reach out for help but they end up going in the wrong direction such as joining a gang ! Not to say that all children and teens and kids are involved in this  type of action . Only kids and teens that are trying to reach out to be honest you'd be amazed how much are involved which is very sad because their probably all bright and have good intention but don't know how to express them selves  Personally I don't know what I'd do with out my mom because she is my mom first and my best friend  second. my support systems she  helps me when I can't keep me feet on the ground . She means the world to me ! .

A  future is a helping hand !

Memoir # 3 Growing up 

Personally , I wish I was still little because you didn't have to worry about anything or anyone . You kind of just do you own thing and sit back and relax but besides getting into trouble with your parents that's a little different. There are a bunch of responsibilities that come along with growing up such as graduation which scares me the most because I have no idea what I'm going to be going after high school . not only that just the fact that I wont be with my friends because everyone is going to be going in there own direction and figuring out what there want to do because its not going to be like high school anymore were all going to be in the real world . 

all in all to me growing up scares me I just wish I was a little kid again were everything was way more slack and I  had no care in the world and  thought everything was perfect . Which everything is clearly not perfect and now that I'm grow up I know now that everything is far from perfect . Maybe who knows maybe just one day everything will be .As well as along with growing up there's transformation !

youth is still in me forever !

Memoir # 2

Family 

For this photo I chose to use a few different photo of my family members . Personally , I love my family so much and I'd do anything for them. When it comes down to it I'd say that my family is pretty loyal and very loving expectantly my mom she is very caring of others and always there for me . Which I really appreciate  Everyone in my family loves and cares for everyone so much .The sad part is that my siblings are all grow up and all of them moved out which is sad because I'm really close with them . My sister that is the oldest now moved out which really sucks because she didn't only moved out but she move to Alberta which sucks because its not like I can take walk and she her I'd have to flew out but its worth it . She always be there for me no matter what .

The same with  my step dad - I call him dad because he's been there for me since day one and I love him to death. He'll always be there for me as well . Were just super close. I wish  he was my real dad because like I've said before he has always been there for me since day one .On of our favorite moments is when we went on a  motorcycle ride which are so much fun I and enjoy them so much.

This one time we went on a motorcycle ride for 3 hours on the high way in the summer honestly I wish I could go back to that day because it was so much fun . The wind blowing super fast in our faces but we didn't care because we were having fun. The thing that I didn't like is when we were on the motorcycle we were going super fast and my dad was doing zig zaggs and I felt like I was going to fall of the motorcycle . I didn't I just got a huge adrenaline rush .

All in all I love my family so much and I'd do anything for them . I help them if they got into trouble we  have each other backs . No matter what were always going to be there for each other .

                   Ill always be by your side !

 Memoir # 1

confessions

Personally, my confession is that I adore Miley Cyrus she is amazing . Since day one when I heard of her and when I was little I listened to her music all the time and sometime it helped me escape the real world ,I was in my own world . If I ever got a chance to meet Miley Cyrus I would probably be overwhelmed because I looked up to her as I was growing up . when I was little I always watched Hannah Montana and I thought it was the coolest shaw considering her dad got to be in it with her and I've aways wanted to be an actor like Miley Cyrus I looked and admired her so much she was kind of like an mentor if that makes sense . I know one day I'll meet her I'm not going to give up . Never give up always believe !


 

                                  HATE

Six word memoir #4

------------->' I strongly hate mice so much ' 

Hate - Personally ,  I hate mice  there so creepy and they just look nasty . I've never liked them and  I I personally get really freaked out by them really easily ! I don't know why I've just always been very scared of them.  Its has just been one of those thing where I never really liked them just because they can carry so many different kind of diseases. I personally didn't have any photos of them so I took one of the Internet .

The link is www.mice.con - Personally I could even put a picture Neisse they are so nasty and I can't stand looking at them because they are so nasty so here is the link feel free to check it out and my quote is *I strongly hate mice so much*!

Personal addition

Personal Addition

Personally , my spring break was amazing I had such a good time . The reason why I had a good time was because I was with all friend and family which made it better then ever . We all laughed and was so relaxed because we didn't have to do anything like go to school . We got to sleep in but that didn't happen very much because I like to keep myself busy so all most everyday I Andy best friend Dylan went out and explored the city a little bit more . Even through it my seem there's not much to do in winning there is which actually kind of surprised me . I didn't really realize that there are cool and interesting things in Winnipeg . Even though I've been all most everywhere in Winnipeg it's still fun to explore with a friend that doesn't very often . I didn't only do that I also went out with some other friends and we went to a movie worst idea ever becuases we went to see SpringkBreaker (I don't know if you ever watched it but don't I'm telling you know save you money please) When I and  my friends and I went it to watch the movie we didnt think it was going to be that bad but it was we were so tempted to leave but we didn't becuasse the worst it got the funnier it had got . which was suprisly wired .

Black out poetry

                     Reflection 
                                                             Black Out Poetry 

Personally , I really enjoyed the Blackout Poetry it was really fun and different which is  why I really enjoyed it  !   It was kind of frustrating at the begging I started out a little bumpy because I would find one really good one and then try and connect it to two more was kind of hard but over time reading article after article you don't even think about it . Before you know it you have a theme and all of your poems connect to each other in some kind of way . Which I thought was neat  how they came together because at the start I was kind of worried that they weren't going to connect  There were a couple thing that I found very unique about this project that it was very different from very other one I've ever done not only that but its very different and with that said I thought that it was kind f neat how we make a poem out of a few words and all of sudden they just connect . 

Personally , I've learned a lot that I didn't know before such as I that I enjoy Blackout Poetry more then I thought I would . At first I thought it was silly but once I got engaged with it I really started to enoy it but at the begging I wasn't to sure of it so I think I learned never look a blind eye at something when you don;t know nothing about it ! Personally I think we should have more fun and cool assignment like Black out Poetry .

I had left a comment on Nick and Andy's picture that they created together. I chose that picture becuase I thought it was cute and it looked like they put a lot of effort into it .Which they most likly put a lot of hard work into becuase I remember being that little not not wanting to sit still for five minutes so I could imagine . How they felt when they made that photo . Autmatly I thought that they'd apperecaite and enjoy that someone is commenting on there photo even though there in grade 1 and 2 they were probably overwhelmed and excited that people were looking at there blog becuase I know if I were in grade 1 or 2  I'd be over joyed and excited .

 

 

Personally , to me a good comment is with no vulagr language and just being respectful to someone elses  work that they put out there for people to see that enjoy it. People do put a lot of work into the thing they want people to see and not to trash talk there stuff becuase I know that there are people  out there that do that which is unforunt but in some cases it can and cannot be controlled . All in all a good commment is just being respectful and friendly and not being rude to someones work.

 

 

On the other hand the characteristist of a byou ad comment are the following :Vulgar language and being rude and disrespectful , as well as thing such as goofying around and being mean and thinking you funny but you turly not ! 

Personal addition

Persoanlly , I love traveling even through I havent been to many place I plan on to do more exploring around the world . Which well be fun and interssting to see other places. So far I've been to the states and in the states I went to grand forks and fargo. I've also been to teeth bridge alberta. Which was beautiful . I've also been to minnesota and fort frances. Which was a lot of fun because I got to see my cousins. Now in may im going to be going to las vegas with my family which I'm really excited about becuase I've never been there before and its gpong to be a lot of fun  considering I'm going to be going with my whole family .Were going to be going for a week or longer and I'm which im super pumped about . Then in july I'm going to be going to see Justin Bieber in concert with one of my best friend which is Seleena in ottawa . The fun part about os that were going tp be driving put there and on the way there were going to be going to stay in stratford for a night whhich os Justin Biebers home town . While we're there were going to go to Justin BIebers grandmas house in stratford considerring tje tpwn os so small well be able to find his grandmas house .

All in all I'm really pumped becuase this summer is going to be amazing and super fun and whl lnows wjay else is to come .

Personally , my family means the world to me expecially my cousin maddie were basically the same person . We both enjoy the same thing and we both have same interest . She means so much to me we've been through a lot and well always be there for each other not matter what . I got her back and shes got my back .

Personal Addition 

  One of my goals is to achieves a high average because personal  I enjoy school most of the time and I always want to learn more and achieve to my highest and  full potential . I believe education is very important but so many people have taken advantage of it which is not good because their are people that would do anything for an education. Which honestly is so sad because they can't have an education and that people that don't care have no instinctive what it feels like because they just take it for granted and get everything handed over to them.

My personal addition #2

Personally , I really enjoy photography and taking photos on my spare time. My camera is like a bestfriend it captures so many interesting and cool images such as when the sun just rises . Thoes are always the most beautiful photos  I mainly like  to take photo's of my friends , family , and my  animals which I currently have two dogs and a cat they are everything I honestly love them so much . The sad part is my cat now has been missing for a while  and it sucks but my cat knows  where he lives.  I just hope he can find his way back home !

Justin bieber (insiration )

Personally , I really enjoy listening to justin bieber on my spare time . I just think his is a good singer at such a young age he has made it so big . Which is honsstly incredible and is insipering . All in all I can't wait to see him in concert in july which I'm going  with my best friend Seleen and honestly I can't wait and cant stop talking about it because its going to be epic ! 

Perks
Stephen chboski
1-34

Weekly response #1

Personally , even before I started reading I predicted that nothing really was going to happen based on the front cover of the book but when I began to read the back cover of the book a bunch of thoughts came rushing through my head and I began to wonder what going to hapen next ? Who's is going to be involved ? At that point I had became very curious and as I began to read the book it got super interesting and better and I wanted more answers . I couldn'r put it down becuase I had more questions that I wanted answered . Example ( "Why did Charile tell his parents about his sister getting hit even through she told him not to " ? ) Personally , I probably would have done the same if that were my sister because I wouldn't want them to be in an abusive relationship becuase it wouldn't be healthy.  I would want my parents to know just like Charile told his mom and dad about his sister boyfriend .

Even if that were my sister I'd say something to my mom and dad even if it came between my sister and her boyfriend she'd thank me in the long run . As for Charile I don't think thay will be the case . I predict that Charile's sister is not really forgiving because I believe that Charile's sister is in love with this boy and just the fact that Charile told his parents may or may not ruin there relationship .

Personally I was "WOW" because I only had read thirty pages and theres all ready a conflict . Which shocked me because I wasent expecting Charile sister reaction as to what happend. I thought she would of been a little bit more cool ,  calm , and colleted but she wasent any of that I felt as if she over reacted to Charil . Then again if I told my sister not to do something and she went out of her way and did it . Anyway I'd be livid as well . So in a way I understand why she reacted that way she did .

Perks
Stephen Chboski
74-90

Weekly Reader response #3

I predicted that more was going to to go on between Sam and Charile considering the fact that Sam kissed kissed Charile but suprisely nothing did happen. Which I'm shocked because I thought that they were going to go out for Chariles birthday when they got back from they trip but Sam and Patrick didn't even call to wish him a happy birthday like they said they were going to. Which is sad because that's all Charile really wanted just a Happy birthday wish . Didn't happen ! .

Personally I kind of though that was going to happen to Charile but Sam and Patrick probably just got caught up with what they were doing because they were on a trip and having fun and they probably just got distracted and didn't mean to forget but that happens in life . Which personally I know how that feels which sucks . You just have to learn to look at the bright side because there will always be one next year and the year after that and so on , In away its different for Charile because he does't have many friends his only has a couple which are Sam and Patrick so I think that's why Charile was upset more then anything .

Even through he had his family with him for his birthday and his brother that had flew in for him.  Personally I feel that he would of liked to celebrate his birthday with his friends because he can relate to them better then he can to his family. Which are Sam and Patrick but he wasn't able to .

Weekly Response

Perks
Stephen choosy
30 -74

Personally , I didn't think that Sam was going to kiss Charlie , I wasn't expecting that to happen at all I was kind of shocked because sam always told Charlie not to think of her In that way .she told him that she was to old for him . Which person I don't think age really matter if you two years older.

Just the fact that Charlie really like Sam and now that she kissed him his feelings that he has for her are to progress even more because she has lend him on . Which I don't think is right because If I were Charlie I wouldn't want to be in his position , Before that even Occurred Sam had asked Charlie if be has ever bed kissed before a he had said no but do my parents count and Sam had said besides your parents . He had said no . PersonAlly I think Sam was shocked but I think it was that Charlie was scared that Charlie hasn't kissed anyone in his life time . i believe that he wanted to wait to find someone that cares about him a lot which Sam shows that she does .

All in all personally I think that Sam wanted to to kiss Charlie because she really cared about him and just the fact that he really like her and cares about her it wouldn't be wired it would be genuine .

I predict that more is going to go on with Charlie and Sam. I think there not just to remain friends .I think that Sam will start to get feeling for Charlie .

Hi , my name is Jace Slater

   I'm currently in grade 11 and im reading a book called Perks and its super interesting from the time I pick it up and from the time I put it down . It never has a point were im not inerested in it. It always seems to have a rise or some sort of conflict in it. Which personally I enjoy becuase it makes the book a lot more intresting to read and enjoy able . If there wasn't any kind of conflict in this book then it would be borning and personally I dont think I'd like it as much but becuase there is its super fun and enjoy able to read and I'd suggest or tell anyone to read this book becuase it super good .  

 

 

personally I believe that anyone who hates reading would be super intreseted in this book becuase it  is so good and I could probably go on forever how much I enjoy this book.